Why do people travel? Give reasons
Travelling across the time zone serves as hobby for myriad number of people these days. Indeed, some people like to travel for recovering from work, some travel to quench thirst of acquiring knowledge, while others travel for work purpose. I would like to throw light on these reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, most individuals in this complex demanding world are absorbed in the hustle and bustle of hectic tedious daily schedule. In order to unwind their brain from monotonous life, people prefer to travel to different places for vacation and to spend leisure time with family. For instance, my brother is physician by occupation, so he hardly spares time during her ten hours daily shift. To prevent overexertion, he takes long vacation once in three months. Moreover, vacation trip aids him to concentrate on his work better when he returns back. This applies to most people, even psychologist suggests to take break to prevent depression and other mental disorders.
Secondly, expatriates move to different countries to pursue higher studies. In fact, number of foreign students is exponentially increasing every year due to improved quality of education and preferred future benefits. My own experience is compelling example of this. When I finished my Physical Therapy Program I was searching for reputed college to continue my further studies. To my surprise, I discovered that to obtain degree in United States comes with tremendous positive outcomes. As a result, I am fortunate today to have a stable career and further options to expand my horizon of knowledge.
Thirdly, discrepancies in economy of different countries are predominant factor responsible for people migrating to obtain jobs. Everyone knows that Bangladesh being the poorest country in the whole world has fewer employment opportunities for their residents. Indeed, many people struggle hard to make living and they are mainly hand to mouth. Moreover, to avoid saturation and fierce competition, many citizens like to travel different countries such as Canada, United States of America or Middle East countries to make their ends meet. Thus, travelling to developed countries serves boon in time s of economic crisis.
To recapitulate, it is worth saying that travelling to different places serves multiple purposes such as leisure time, to enhance knowledge and to acquire decent paying jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39005235602 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77238479129 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620418848168 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5684624814 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5909090909 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207663960442 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679030230402 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138794939932 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205592520338 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.302247972914 0.0645574589148 468% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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