workers are more satisfied with doing different tasks rather than similar ones.
Describe your opinions.
Workers feeling toward their tasks has great importance. In this way, some people think that workers are more satisfied with different tasks, while others disagree. In my own perspective, I do believe that variety is more acceptable for people such as workers because of two main reasons which are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
First of all, human beings are instinctively creative and do not like to do similar works. In fact, tending to have diversification is in each individual's spirit, therefore, they are more satisfied with doing different actions. My life is a compelling example of this thought. I am a simple worker and work in a car company for around ten years. During the early years, I was in charge of fastening wheels screws, I have been doing this simple work for more than 3 years and I was completely depressed with my work, even though I have an energetic character. After that, I have changed my work and started to work in assembly groups where I was responsible for assembling 10 different parts of motor engine dealing
with different materials such as metallic, plastic and also hybrid components. Although my income was the same, I was feeling lively. This is just because of the variety of works that I was assigned to do.
Secondly, being more productive is a goal for all factories which is accessible by boosting workers efficiency and accuracy. In other words, as the workers do various tasks, they establish a feeling of being capable of doing everything. In this regard, the more they find themselves profitable for the company, the greater their performance will be, as a result, company will reach to its goal by just providing different tasks for the workers. To illustrate this point, a pilot investigation was done in my country, China, where contains an enormous amount of workers to understand the correlation
between companies productivity and workers internal feeling. The results were surprising, it was understood that those companies that are successful in keeping their worker motivation at a high level have more chances of being productive. The scientists relate survey consequences to the power of workers feeling which can be reached by providing some kind of varieties.
In sum, above from aforementioned explanation, it is obvious that I do agree that different tasks are more satisfying for workers to do. However, I suggest some more analytical and experimental investigation in order to find different aspects of this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10487804878 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91724140962 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531707317073 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5321179719 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.157894737 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283720763752 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977721220841 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073646941764 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164783414914 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717368959789 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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