Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The work is a significant part of life and employees’ satisfaction depends on diversity things. While some group mentions to high rate of workers’ consent with more duties, other critics the idea that refers to relation between more tasks with employee high convincing. I disagree with the statement which mentions to variety tasks for a workday due to three points, reducing the employees’ performance, not completing work and creating mental and physical problems.
First of all, the performance of a worker is an important issue which affect the total performance of an office and the expected results. In fact, plenty of different tasks reduce dramatically the efficiency of the employees instead of creating satisfaction. There are some contrast opinions which some group are thinking different tasks cause more satisfaction, while other accept less and similar works to high convenience. For example, 2 months ago when I involved with diversity tasks at the office, I exhausted with my works and I just experienced low performance instead of feeling satisfied.
Secondly, time plays a significant role in the working field. In the other words, more tasks causes to disperse time among more things that don’t let to finish the expected duties. Contrast opinions are expressed from some groups that one group accept the creating satisfaction by variety jobs and other repudiates making convenience due to limited time which cause more difficulties for employees. As an illustration, one office decided to modify the office conditions so base on the researches outcomes which done between two groups of employee, first group who faced excess tasks experienced more problems and they were inconvenience than second group with routine tasks.
Thirdly, work affects the mental and physical health directly. It means that a special range of tasks can be improve the abilities and increasing the amount of jobs due to satisfaction cause the health problems. While, some uncover the positive effect of satisfaction on the mental health, other depicts the more negative effects which can cause with diversity jobs for employee and span the mental and physical side of health. My friend is a logical one to illustrate the adverse effect of the variety works. In fact, she had involved with plenty of duties which after a while caused depression and physical problem. Therefore, doing diversity jobs for satisfactions doesn’t seem logical.
Consequently, I am not in favor of the mentioned statement which refers to more satisfaction with more tasks due to three points that make more clarification, facing with low amount of performance, not finishing the tasks and reducing the mental and physical problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38694638695 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93910647818 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480186480186 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.307541366 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.388888889 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159831526667 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521660712735 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432163695026 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994331999944 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360620499961 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.