Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
whether which one makes workers more happy working in various tasks or same tasks? certinly some people, if asked, would agree with the
as far as i am concerned,i adopt firm that works must do diffrent tasks to be more happy.
firstly, we must consider that most worker in they way they feel like human and not like a mechine or robot. Morever they most use their diffrent abilites to be more happy.let's consider follwing example. a firend of mine whom i've known for 10 year.he was worker in a company .his works was similr task and he all day do the same .after a while he start to fel very bad and he hired from his job but after 2 month sappindly he find another job but this time his job was very diffrent.know he is very happy person and this exprience thout me how work like arobot can make a human unhappy.
secondly, we most pay attention to remarksable aspect of creativity on our life, human mine works very well and we must not stop that,inded a reaserch by hamid reaz in tehran toghder with my own exprence make clear picture for that how our socity need creative people and must when give the dimilar tasks we stop thir mine power.
in conclusion, i think it is good to work in diffrent taks to use our mine power and not stop our creativity by doing same or similar tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38589211618 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22313723082 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.348946209 48.9658058833 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.0 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160484128737 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860043385447 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358136872495 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941766541919 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349469421258 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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