Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, humans have been putting their efforts so as to find a well-paid and a decent job in their lives in order to make living and earn a vast sum of money to pay their ways. A plethora of people bring up the idea that people are willing to concentrate on different tasks while others believe that people are more likely to do the same task day in day out. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that stays focused on the job is one of the utmost important issues and people should try to carry out their tasks vigorously and meticulously. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that having a job is the essence of life and vast majorities of people bend over backward to reach the pinnacle of their career. In order to reach this goal, employees try hard to do various tasks regardless of having done the task precisely. Generally phrased, if workers want to be successful employees in their jobs they should try their best and make an effort to concentrate on their tasks. As a vivid example, doing many jobs will prevent employees from staying focus and they will do their tasks incomplete. To elucidate more on this issue, do the same task will guarantee the accuracy of works and people will not do something wrong and will not come up with egregious mistakes while working on different tasks.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that if employees do many different tasks, indeed, they prevent other people from having a suitable job who are looking for a decent job. If we take a minute to ponder over it if workers do the similar tasks every day not only can they complete their tasks greatly and effectively but also create an opportunity for other people to find an appropriate job. Going into the depth, employees in this situation not only can feel satisfied but also can enhance their self-confidence and esteem to some extent. However, this is the one side of a coin. In fact, when people concentrate on the similar task, they lose their enthusiasm and incentive to keep their jobs. Different tasks could provide fertile ground for people to increase their information and experiences as much as possible and become a self-sufficient person in near future.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... humans have been putting their efforts so as to find a well-paid and a decent job in th...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ot go unnoticed is that if employees do many different tasks, indeed, they prevent other peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, as to, in fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75644028103 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64503914639 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501170960187 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3988855982 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.470588235 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24211632848 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834786404817 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736292107356 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144848221912 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727123548169 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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