Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I asseverate with the statement that workers are more satisfied when they are exposed to different types of work rather doing same world the whole day. Working on different things are more advantageous and benefits the person who involves in multiple jobs in a day. There are several reasons to say why it will be advantageous and beneficiary among which I would aptly elucidate few of them with some real examples in further paragraphs.
First and the foremost advantage working in multiple job is gaining knowledge. For instance, my cousin is a software consultant in an IT company. Besides that he also work as a software developer and customer service in the same company. He plays three roles in the same corporate. This means he has knowledge in the field of consultancy, development and also customer service. Thus, handling multiple jobs help to proliferate our existing knowledge and widens opportunity thinking capacity.
Second, handling multiple jobs also helps to handle time efficiently and effectively. Time management is one of the essential habit that we have to develop in this fast moving world. Otherwise the work would pile up and we will end up with not doing them efficiently. Thus, handling multiple jobs make us learn have to manage our time. For example I am a software professional and besides, I am yoga instructor too. Handling both of these jobs in a day helps me to manage my time. I will utilize my whole day working on both the jobs and hence it leads to more productivity.
One more benefit that definitely deserves few words here is opportunity in the outside world. We we handle multiple jobs, we will gain expertise in variety of fields. This will help us to find job outside anywhere in this world. One of our team mate shifted to a new location and she had to find the job for her survival. She was good in training fresh graduates and programming. She started a tuition and taught students the programming.
To wrap it up, working o different jobs is essential in order to compete with this rapid. More jobs you handle more the benefits you avail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
..., my cousin is a software consultant in an IT company. Besides that he also work as a...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ousin is a software consultant in an IT company. Besides that he also work as a softwar...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...e to develop in this fast moving world. Otherwise the work would pile up and we will end ...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...s, handling multiple jobs make us learn have to manage our time. For example I am a ...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: We
...re is opportunity in the outside world. We we handle multiple jobs, we will gain expe...
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Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...pertise in variety of fields. This will help us to find job outside anywhere in this world. One...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73046371497 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0712725709 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113846053438 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032602410683 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622749850029 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733350029202 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804587534139 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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