People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The "behavior" has a plethora of definitions. But in general, behavior can be defined as the person's will to perform his action. There are several factors that contribute to the behavior of a person.A person's behavior depends on the environment, peers, friends but, eventually it is the person's responsibility for his behavior. Hence it is un-justful to state that external factors are the sole responsible for a person's behavior.
The human beings who are called to be intelligent creatures on the earth has the ability and liberty to make the choices. The ability to think is a natural process of a human and this ability is influenced by external factors but in the end it he is responsible and the sole owner for the action. History provides a variety number of examples of men and women who are great people and flawed. They are the sole owners for their actions. It can be the circumstances that are forcing them to do something, but in the end they are responsible for ones persona. There are several rules that has been brought by the nation that has to be followed. For example a law in a nation says that if anyone litters on the road, will be punished. A person who is conscious about this will try to avoid littering and thereby abiding the rules. But, when he goes to some other country and there no such rule is present, he might do or not do. It is always the way the people execute their thoughts. Students are always told they have to work hard to score good marks. Some students gets inspired and motivated and are pushed to do that but on a contrast, some students do not take it seriously and act according to their will.
Thus, even though the external factors affect a person's behavior only to some extent, eventually its person's responsibility to execute it or not.
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...ns responsibility to execute it or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, as to, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66457680251 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7566322272 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479623824451 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0388681578 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135212585904 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516595493857 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659988149513 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885732734569 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490557151027 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.