Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People always look for the things that bring them the sense of self satisfaction. Among all reasons, dealing with daily and similarity duties have the most contribution to ruin this sense. Some people think that repetitive task is better because the new and challenging task takes a lot of energy and also elevate their stress. Whoever, I avoid to deal with repetitive tasks to keep my happiness and internal satisfaction. Ensuing paragraphs explain my reasons for this position.
First of all, it is crystal clear that routine duties kill the creativity. Our mind is so able and complicated but if it does not deal with challenging works consequently its novelty will be disappear. Thus, it is essential to involve with verity tasks to keep our mental creativity. The result of a survey in high schools students in AUT university shows the 50 percent decrease in the mental novelty of the people dealing with ordinary and repetitive tasks.
Secondly, it is obvious that routine works are so boring so, after a while people feel that they are not useful and have not impressive contribution in the society. As a result the sense of self satisfaction in those people reduce dramatically and they have not enough incentive to keep their job. For example, my father works in a toy company as a counter for 10 years. He always deals with a replicated task and he just keeps the job for money but after a tolerating boring years he decided to leave the work and initiated a new and exciting work.
In summary, work and daily duties are not distinct from us but repetitive is the thing that discourage us to continue those duties. It is because similarity tasks can dramatically reduce creativity and also ruin our motive to keep our job or daily tasks. Therefore, I strongly believe that ordinary and routine task remove people's satisfaction so, to be satisfied try to do new and challenging tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid dealing'.
Suggestion: avoid dealing
...d also elevate their stress. Whoever, I avoid to deal with repetitive tasks to keep my happin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in summary, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83692307692 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71649617693 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9817839449 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128449748543 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440510685276 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323703172025 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820469802062 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352496280373 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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