Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the work day than when they do similar tasks all day long
We are living in a modernized era confronting by day by day increasing industrial progression and also dramatically raising in general population who need to work in order to obscure mere subsistence. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that the best and much proportion of today ̓s humans’ life time would be spent through their working time. Therefore, we cannot disparage relevant issues to their career specially workers consisting a colossal body of work population. A prevalent topic undergoing serious debate is whether workers should do different types of works or be engaged in one kind of task. Although, it is a bit hard to reach a consensus in this issue, I am to a great extent, of the opinion that it is better to keep busy with varies kinds of tasks. In the following essay, I will substantiate my vantage point.
As we all know, workers are reputed to be the forerunners of the industrial of every country all over the world. No one can turn a blind eye to their fundamental roles in improving and enhancing the economic conditions in the society. According to statistic estimations coming from prolonged research they work longer than any other group of jobs in the society. Therefore, if they do not work well one day, the whole economy of society will encounter with huge problems. So it is necessary to get notable attention toward their working pattern. Burnout causing by performing an even repetitive work in the long run, is accounted a key element of falling down a society and declining toward collapse. To more shed on this issue, satisfying of what they do and get pleasure from doing distinctive tasks can bring about flourishing society.
The second aspect that deserves to be outlined is that doing separate tasks results in gaining more and more skills helping workers to become well-equipped workforce in the community. As a matter of fact, different tasks focusing on diverse abilities will provide opportunities for utilizing potential talents. Under this circumstances, if workers are reluctant to go on their job, they could be successful in other field owning to their developed different potentials. Furthermore, as we spend the best time of the day working, if we experience monotone and mundane situation creating by doing identical works every day, we will not feel refresh and motivated to work well. Simply stated, performing different tasks and having delightful workplace, workers can do the best.
Drawing upon the reasons, providing various and delightful conditions, workers will do in a way that propel society toward being flourished and by the same token, equip themselves to various skills assisting them to work on the different fields of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'by day'.
Suggestion: by day
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...uch proportion of today ̓s humans' life time would be spent through their working ti...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... for utilizing potential talents. Under this circumstances, if workers are reluctant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, in general, kind of, as a matter of fact, by the same token, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10585585586 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9209714658 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572072072072 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9707199294 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.315789474 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345649628569 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961847250872 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747448405382 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203115277365 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761484288881 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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