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Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long.
No one would doubt that workers’ satisfaction varies as the kind of work. However, views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of which kinds of work make workers feel satisfied. Some people contend that doing same work makes staffs feel satisfied because workers can work monotonously and cannot do mistakes, while others disagree with that. Thus, according to following reasons and some of my personal experiences, I believe that various kinds of work make workers pleased.
First of all, workers care about future careers, and participating in different kinds of work makes them get b...
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Sentence: According, workers can achieve accomplishment form various work.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to form and various
Sentence: Admittedly, doing same job may make workers think the work is easy- to-do, so it may reasonable that workers want to repeat their job everyday.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to may and reasonable
Sentence: Second, doing same things makes workers irritable; however, various kinds of work make workers feel challengeable.
Error: challengeable Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Therefore, I quitted the job.
Error: quitted Suggestion: No alternate word
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More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns (like 'They...') as the subject of a sentence.
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Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 368 350
No. of Characters: 1799 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.38 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.889 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.549 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.524 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.005 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.905 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.193 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5