Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a more modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
When we want to choose a place for living, they consider many factors like convenient, accessibility to shopping centers, quietness, etc. Some people prefer to live in a modern apartment which is located in a busy street. In contrast, some people like to live in a big traditional and old house in a quiet location. Both of these properties has their own advantages and disadvantages.
About the apartments, modern or typical, are shared by many people. Living in an apartment needs a different perspective toward the quality of life. When you live in apartment, you may have problem with your neighbors about parking, noises and some other issues. Generally, apartments are not a good place for children. It is boring for them because it does not has yard and a place to play with friends. Furthermore, in an apartment, everything is limited and you cannot change most of things based on your taste. You are not able to gardening in apartment and you may have trouble if you like pets, because in many apartments pets are forbidden.
In contrast, you have a completely different situation if you choose to live in traditional house. You can access to more variety of facilities in a house. Most of the houses have a little or big yard which is suitable for gardening and playing with your kids and pets. Furthermore, you have more privacy in your house. In spite of apartments, which neighbors may listen to your conversations, in houses you can assure that nobody may not listen to your personal conversations. In addition, houses are suitable for growing children. They can play in yard, have their own personal big room. Also, houses mostly are located in suburbs which is very quiet and you can enjoy calmness. Finally, you do not have a parking problem in your own house as well as a big garage for your extra stuffs.
Personally, I prefer a traditional house to live rest of my life. As I mentioned, traditional houses are big which provide you a lot of places to put your stuffs. As I like gardening and cultivating trees, I think personal house is more suitable for me. Furthermore, I really hate to share my place with others and I really freak out in busy places. I think it is possible to make my own traditional house modern by buying modern stuffs and systems. So, that is why I prefer traditional houses.
To sum up, choosing between a modern apartment and traditional house is totally dependent on our personality. If you like shopping and live in a modern place, apartments are more suitable, but if you like to live in a calm and big place, house would be a better choice. But as a suggestion, please consider that you are not the only one who make decision about living place. You should know that if you want to have baby, apartment are not a good choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
... is boring for them because it does not has yard and a place to play with friends. ...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... is boring for them because it does not has yard and a place to play with friends. ...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the things') or simply say ''most things''.
Suggestion: most of the things; most things
...ything is limited and you cannot change most of things based on your taste. You are not able t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, i think, in addition, in contrast, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68571428571 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73838921817 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414285714286 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5235499221 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5333333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357187012566 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105843467004 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711005622993 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222982426729 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068785424092 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.