Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
When young people decide to apply in a university which is far away from their city, they are in dilemma to choose between dormitory or rent an apartment. Disregarding money, which is the most important factor, there are several factors that should be considered carefully in choosing dormitory or apartment.
When you choose apartment, you rent a place that is quiet and private. You may share the facilities with your roommate, which is chosen by you, not anybody else. In apartment, you can focus on your courses because there is no other students that make noise and disturb you. Furthermore, you do not need to wait for some facilities like bath or W.C. because of many other people that are on the line to use them. In addition, in your apartment, you can design your personal and shared stuffs with your taste and your roommate's taste. Thus, living in an apartment is similar to live with your spouse that needs to organized and learn some skills life cooking, cleaning and saving electricity and water.
In contrast, If you choose dormitory, you get some other kinds of benefits. In dormitory, you are close to campus which let you to study in library until night or use university's facilities every time you need. Furthermore, your security is guaranteed by campus police and they are maintaining student's stuff and health in 24 hours of the day, Furthermore, most of dormitories provide meal at the breakfast, lunch and dinner to the students which help them to allocate most of their time to studying instead of cooking. An other advantage of living in dormitory is that you have broader communications compared to living in apartments. Because you live in a place that is full of other students which comes from other cities and countries. They can help you to learn courses and pass exams and many other things. So, living in dormitory helps you to get more experience in interaction with other people that is very important future work prosperity.
Personally, I prefer to live in apartment. As mentioned, personal apartment is quiet and I am a person whose need badly a calm place to concentrate. I can not live in dormitory because I am very sensitive about being on time. Since bath and toilet is shared by many people in dormitory, I really freak out if got late because of a problem in access of these facilities. Finally, I really like cooking in a private place. So, as dormitory is limited in cooking, I prefer to live in a place that I can cooking everyday.
To sum, both dormitory and apartment have their own benefits. But it is depend on you that prefer which one of them. Actually, it is highly related to personality too. If you are a introvert person who likes to live in a quiet places, choose apartment, otherwise, dormitory is more suitable for extrovert people who likes to live in a busy an active places. Finally, if you like to live in apartment and use university facilities too, get an apartment that is very close to university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, really, regarding, so, thus, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76402321083 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68139387886 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437137330754 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1870943665 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7307692308 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8846153846 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80769230769 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244721291087 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771399723267 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692273578234 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144737098046 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400870879698 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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