Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone, or be your own business
Self employed, work for someone, or be your own business, are all different types of work. Each has their advantages and also their desavantage. To decide which one can be better for us, we need to think in our mindset.
Some people can organazine theirself and also can have a focuss rotine, so they can be self-employed and achieve good results without need another person. However, other people need someone else to give them stuffs and to determine both what and when they need to do. On the other hand, there are some people that can, behind organize theirself, they can also manager other people being own a business, giving stuffs and goals to other peoples and cheking their work and develop in their business.
I known peoples that get lost and confuse when they don't have someone else to give them some stuffs, goals, and the quantity of time that they need to spend each day. they would achieve good results and sucess, but in my oppion they limit themself and also they are totally dependence of other peoples.Also, sometimes they can be classified as lazy people, which is not a good characteristic to have.
According with my mindset and my abilities, I can tell that is not a big deal for me shedule my own rotine work, and I can do it pretty well, I'm a dedicate people, have my own goals and I can be self-employed without big thoubles. I also can tell that I'm working hard in my interation abilites, because in the future, I intent to become a own business and gather some peoples to help me to grow and achieve the sucess that I want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
... work and develop in their business. I known peoples that get lost and confuse when ...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...les that get lost and confuse when they dont have someone else to give them some stu...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... time that they need to spend each day. they would achieve good results and sucess, ...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...are totally dependence of other peoples.Also, sometimes they can be classified as la...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tine work, and I can do it pretty well, Im a dedicate people, have my own goals an...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e work, and I can do it pretty well, Im a dedicate people, have my own goals and I can be ...
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Line 4, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...hout big thoubles. I also can tell that Im working hard in my interation abilites,...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cause in the future, I intent to become a own business and gather some peoples to...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...row and achieve the sucess that I want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55160142349 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45832012772 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0169208745 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235580894647 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10884496004 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103501918864 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164410987266 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882436413081 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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