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Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wait until the class or meeting is over. say nothing
It is very often while attending a class or a meeting, people may find that what speaker states in inaccurate way or with some errors. Even though some people agree to give correct answer right away or others hold the opinion that it is better to say nothing, I believe that it will be better to wait until meeting or class get over. I feel this way for some reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, it seems quite rude to speak during the lecture especially to correct someone mistake in front of many other people. For example, if teacher is talking about the another group of creature which is mammals, but she start to describe about reptiles, So correct her mistake is important because maybe students could misinterpret the teacher and thinks that teacher has not knowledge about this topic. If student correct her mistake immediately then it seems rude to teacher, because she does not know her mistake while teaching. This could be sign of student's impoliteness.
Secondly, People can more time to explain their point to teacher or leader, because after the end of the meeting on people are there to disturb them. After the end of the meeting there is a enough time to give the opinion. This is because it will seems professional to leader, and this is how his self respect will be maintained. People can get chance to share their ideas and learn something new from the leader. People can make a good impression in front of leader, and it may be useful for them in future.
Finally, to say nothing will may have bad consequences. People should always be ready for the tell the truth. Sometime say nothing will be more dangerous than say something. For example, in meeting of cost of project, one person know that there is a mistake in calculating the cost, but he cannot give his opinion due to having respect for his seniors. This may lead to big loss of company.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that it is better to correct leader's fault after the end of the meeting. This is because it looks polite to leader and his feeling may not be hurt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is very often while attending a class or a meeti...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mistakes'.
Suggestion: mistakes
...e lecture especially to correct someone mistake in front of many other people. For exam...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...p of creature which is mammals, but she start to describe about reptiles, So correct ...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er mistake while teaching. This could be sign of students impoliteness. Second...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng on people are there to disturb them. After the end of the meeting there is a enoug...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... After the end of the meeting there is a enough time to give the opinion. This i...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ve the opinion. This is because it will seems professional to leader, and this is how...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...f leader, and it may be useful for them in future. Finally, to say nothing will may ha...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nces. People should always be ready for the tell the truth. Sometime say nothing will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i feel, talking about, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59791122715 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35977893163 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496083550914 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4544195415 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6842105263 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203891465165 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588622817474 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456658329415 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112584161811 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374397757496 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.