You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I’m planning to study abroad next year. This actually will be an important experience in my life. However, in my view, there are pros and cons about studying in a foreign country. Therefore, this essay will provide more reasons why I believe this notion, and give further examples to support my view.
First of all, in my opinion, quality educations are provided abroad. There are talented professors and effective facilities that support worldwide students who need to improve their skills and knowledge, and those are reasons that I want to go to study in Harvard University. Therefore, many students in the world, want to apply to this place to be taught by the best in the field. For instance, having this opportunity, I definitely will be able to become more professional because I will learn from many special professors. Moreover, learning in a class that aggregates with many committed classmates is the best opportunity too. Personally, it’s valuable to learn in the class with talented people from different cultures, they will give you more aspects about their culture stories. This will improve myself to be lettered and equal to others.
On the contrary, I am of the opinion that studying abroad will take me far from my familiar life. It's regrettable that, going somewhere distantly from my hometown and my lovely family, makes me homesick. Homesickness not only obstructs my studying but also negatively influences on my mental health. With homesickness, I will not be able to completely concentrate on my education. Moreover, the mental symptoms from it such as depression will disturb my life in a foreign country to more difficult than before. I can attest this from my experience, when I go to study the summer course abroad. I feel unfamiliar about staying alone in my rented room, and care all housework. Nostalgia gradually makes me sad and reduce my curiosity. For this reason, I dislike to live abroad because I will miss my hometown
In conclusion, I believe that I will acquire a good experience from study abroad. This is because although it will be apart me of my familiar hometown which tend me to develop homesickness and many mental illnesses. Studying abroad will give me quality educations to improve my knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 753, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'dislike living'.
Suggestion: dislike living
...reduce my curiosity. For this reason, I dislike to live abroad because I will miss my hometown ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06933333333 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81279615725 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4659598068 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4090909091 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200865935912 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678819849462 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533148897082 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143985618528 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419200812924 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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