One of my dreams is become a physician in Canada. One of the steps to reach this dream is to do an elective program in a Canadian hospital. The elective is a chance for international students to practice medicine as a student abroad, which includes having traditional and practical classes.
In one hand, it is a very positive experience, professional and social speaking. The elective offers the chance to know more about the health system in Canada, the most prevalent diseases that affect this population and how to manage those. In addition, the contact with patients would improve the medical and language skills, which are very important to become a doctor.
Moreover, Canada is a very safe country. I had visited Canada several times in the past and I was positively surprised about its security. The women can walk on the street at night, take the bus alone, use the cellphone and jewelry freely. Those actions would be risky in the Brazilian streets, because there is a high incidence of theft and violence, especially against susceptive people as women and elders. By being a student in Canada I would also benefit from its beautiful landscapes, such as mountains, lakes, water falls, large parks. Considering that I love practice outdoor sports, it would be a perfect scenario for me.
In another hand, being a student abroad is not easy at all. When you are far from family and your closest friends, you feel that no one is around to help you to pass through hard times. Besides that, you still have to adapt to a new society, lifestyle and weather. When all those features are put together can be a challenge experience. However, I believe that those disadvantages are temporaries and a new circle of friends will be formed, family can come by to visit you and the adaptation to the society and the cold weather will come over the time.
Thus, studying abroad can be very challenge but also very profitable. Over all, I believe is worth to try it.
- Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; other have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages if each and support your viewpoint. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TOEFL ESSAY: The college years are the best time in a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 76
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 85
- Some people like to communicate by email and voice mail. Other people like to communicate by telephone or face to face. Which type of communication do you prefer and why. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o a new society, lifestyle and weather. When all those features are put together can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80882352941 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62719837094 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4690049501 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0526315789 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146180166844 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372542125197 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558857958181 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679435539295 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660825899307 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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