You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

Entrepreneurship i.e. owning a business or owning a house is a kind of long term investment. The difference lies in result that each will provide after a certain period of time. Had I been ever given a chance to select between a business and a house, I would go for business instead of a house. In my opinion entrepreneurship is far much better than ownership of a house.

I believe in satisfying my long term goals, which will in a way satisfy my short term goals. Meaning from my point of view if I become an entrepreneur and start a business, attaining the desired level might take some time, ...

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