You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.
By developing transportation technologies, people can access to wide variety of facilities to long and short travel. In fact, before everything, we should consider that these facilities are not distributed fairly among all cities. As a city become greater and prominent, it's transportation devices get more diverse. So, I consider that my city has all kind of transportation devices. With this regard, I think that I have access to personal car, between city buses and train. Each of these machines have some advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, personal car is more suitable but it has a lot cost. The cost of gas is really high nowadays if your car burn a lot of it. In addition, by traveling such a short path by personal car, you can adjust your time. You do not need to go terminal and wait for bus or train. Furthermore, you have a complete authority in your car. You can stop to eat some food or drink tea whenever you want.
Second, between city buses are more economical than cars because many people travel by them, therefore, the rate of traveler to expenditures decrease. Although buses are cheaper, they have some limitations too. For example, if you need a W.C., you should wait for several hours. Furthermore, the seats in buses are so dense. If you are fat or seat near a fat person, you really have a trouble.In buses, you do not have any authority about eating or drinking. You should follow the driver's orders.
Third of all, trains are the cheapest one. In train, you have access to W.C. and seats are more convenient. But most of the trains are slow. If a car go a path in 2 hour, bus can reach it in 3 hours and train in 4 hours. So, you should be patient while traveling with trains. However, trains are more safer that bus and car. In trains you can read your book, eat some food and drink a coffee. Even you can take a nap.
Personally, I prefer to travel this short path by my personal car. Although it costs more than bus and train and it is more dangerous, I love driving car in highways. Moreover, I really care about authority of doing things while traveling. I do not like to wait for a W.C. or ask driver to stop in nearest shop to buy some food. In addition, I really need to smoke hourly. Since smoking is forbidden in train and bus, I should use my personal car in travels.
To sum up, going to travel is getting more easier everyday. Faster trains, safer and convenient buses and hybrid cars offer us many options to travel. This is us that make the right decision based on our interests and situation. In my idea, in short distance, using personal car in more enjoyable and better than other transportation devices.
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- TPO 42 3
- TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task 73
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...a fat person, you really have a trouble.In buses, you do not have any authority ab...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...rains are slow. If a car go a path in 2 hour, bus can reach it in 3 hours and train ...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...veling with trains. However, trains are more safer that bus and car. In trains you can rea...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
...o wait for a W.C. or ask driver to stop in nearest shop to buy some food. In addition, I r...
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Line 11, column 39, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... To sum up, going to travel is getting more easier everyday. Faster trains, safer and conv...
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Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... going to travel is getting more easier everyday. Faster trains, safer and convenient bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in short, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55186721992 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58885583788 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4500669005 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9444444444 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3888888889 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.97222222222 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 4.88709677419 430% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218588882753 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623031769657 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667626170116 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128110964437 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782514963166 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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