young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree with this statements.
Life is always running away either for young or older people and all of us are trying to get the best of it. Personally, I believe that older people has more possibility to enjoy the life and are more confident what to choose for taste the life. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, life require more attention by young people for working and school. Enrolling the different programs, courses, and activities cause the less free time on young people. Hence how they can enjoy the life? If they will have free time of course will take the possibility to relax. For instance, I woke up at 6 am every day and get back by work at 6:00 pm, during this time I did not have time to drink any coffee with my family, meet friends, or go to party. In other hand, the older people like my parents are enjoying good food, meeting friends and playing with their nieces and nephews
Secondly, young people are more in search of jobs and taking money for surviving and doing better life, in contrast the older people are retire and obtain less problems or stress to effort the life because they are not in searching jobs or money. For example, my parents have secure incomes in life and they have no stress for getting money or searching different jobs. Therefor they used to enjoy the life by going traveling and having no problems with stress.
Finally, older people are not preventing their self by having no money or going to complete different job. Instead the young people need to complete the degree programs and getting better job for ensure their future. having less problems, jobs and stress the older people are tasting more the life and taking the best of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...use the less free time on young people. Hence how they can enjoy the life? If they wi...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple. Hence how they can enjoy the life? If they will have free time of course will...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pm, during this time I did not have time to drink any coffee with my family, meet...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'retired'.
Suggestion: retired
... life, in contrast the older people are retire and obtain less problems or stress to e...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... the older people are retire and obtain less problems or stress to effort the life b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ney or going to complete different job. Instead the young people need to complete the d...
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Suggestion: Having
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Line 6, column 225, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ter job for ensure their future. having less problems, jobs and stress the older peo...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...blems, jobs and stress the older people are tasting more the life and taking the best of li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57928802589 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14275654706 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6749178123 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321613602044 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125327312368 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963654959614 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217090887506 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280063021178 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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