I disagree with point which states that younger people are enjoying more than older people, I have lots of evidence to support my statements. I want explore at least few of them in order to have the elder people enjoying in every day life, I am not telling that they should not have fun. What I am trying to say is even the youngster also should that kind of opportunities.
Firstly, older people are enjoying all the field like jobs, position, status, prestige and so on. Earlier those who completed tenth grade they got the job in government but now the same government asking minimum master degree to get the job. Before 20 years those who got appointment government sector, they are eligible for pensioner programme. From 1998 onward whoever joining in the government job they no longer going get that benefits.
Secondly, In India company and the employer are not taking candidate on basis skill but they are giving job those who reserve earlier, so where younger is enjoying all fruits, are they enjoying?. Honestly, speaking no is answer every ever. So the government itself always giving first priority to elder not for the younger. Moreover, there lots of graduated standing on the road without job, they are manial job which not going fulfil his need at all.
Thirdly, come to family issue, all the members of the family give more respect the elder than the younger. For example, when someone coming my house to invite for the marriage function, first question what they are asking you know? where is your father. So here without any doubt elders are getting more respect. Even earlier people used to get marry around 15 to 18 years. Nowadays, all the younger people sacrifice the life for the family, if the younger is male then he is taking care of elders, he has to wait till his elder sister's marriage then only he has the chance of marriage. Even after marriage also it is his responsibility to take sister and sister's kids and parents so where the young generation enjoying, they are just working for the elders.
Finally, the younger people can not get pension or some other social benefit from the government and from the families when he become older. At least for the elder people have social welfare support whereas younger don't any kind of benefit specially in India.
- TPO-27 - Integrated Writing Task The little ice age was a period of unusually cold temperature in many parts of the world that lasted from about the year 1350 until 1900CE. There were unusually harsh winters, and glaciers grew larger in many areas. Scient 80
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-28 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 70
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...order to have the elder people enjoying in every day life, I am not telling that they should...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... are they enjoying?. Honestly, speaking no is answer every ever. So the government...
^^
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the road without job, they are manial job which not going fulfil his need at a...
^^^
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
...question what they are asking you know? where is your father. So here without any dou...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...question what they are asking you know? where is your father. So here without any dou...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... social welfare support whereas younger dont any kind of benefit specially in India....
^^^^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any kind of benefit specially in India.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'honestly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'as to', 'at least', 'for example', 'kind of', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233560090703 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.165532879819 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0748299319728 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0793650793651 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0634920634921 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0997732426304 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0498866213152 0.0351676179071 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31765091635 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249433106576 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0884353741497 0.0887237588012 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00680272108844 0.0209618222197 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0294784580499 0.0139019557991 212% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2315.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 398.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81658291457 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341708542714 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236180904523 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13567839196 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.072864321608 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31765091635 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532663316583 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.8405449619 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8347154272 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 43.5180904523 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.24264705882 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0542532277622 0.300154397459 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0844769606778 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.07574935966 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505980765145 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193427019982 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245834001558 0.114077575197 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365691012154 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309627476848 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0891474245431 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402242668165 0.210909579961 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278992203449 0.0618886996521 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.