Young People enjoy more than older ones. Discuss about this topic by providing various examples.
Some people feel that young people enjoy life more than older people while others feel that older people enjoy more than younger ones. In my opinion certain aspects are enjoyed well by younger generation whereas some other aspects are enjoyed more by the older generation.
Young people enjoy more than the older ones. They don't have any concerns or responsibilities. Similar is in the case of watching a cricket or football match. As young people don't have many obligations they spend a lot of time watching this matches. Even some older people love to watch these matches however due to obligations like job, family, etc... they generally just watch the highlights or just browse in the net for the final scorecard. In such situations young people enjoy a lot. Children of age less than 12 years enjoy more than anyone else. The main reason behind this is that they don't have any social obligations. Consider for instance that child of age below 12 feels like dancing in the middle of the street. He/She will start dancing and enjoying himself/herself. However this is not that case with a child who is 15 or above because they may feel socially awkward to do so. Hence in some aspects young people enjoy more than the older ones.
Old people enjoy certain things more than the younger ones. Old people enjoy nature a lot more than the younger ones. They value nature because of their various experiences and hence enjoy it. However the younger ones don't feel anything special about it. Old people also enjoy silence and privacy more than the younger ones. They know the importance of silence and hence they embrace it. There are also certain things that old people enjoy more than young ones. Consider for instance, an old man and a teenager go to watch a football match. Both of them love football and it is certain that both of them will enjoy a lot. However, there is a possibility that the old man will enjoy more than the teenager. The main reason for this is that the teenager is completely involved in technology. For instance, the man would prefer to watch the match with naked eyes ,while the boy could be busy taking pictures and posting them on social media platforms such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. By doing so the boy is actually not thoroughly enjoying the match. There also other areas that old people enjoy more than the younger ones like politics.
Finally, I think both young people and old people have their share of happiness. I feel that there can be exceptions on both the sides . However, I think that the younger ones edge the older ones mainly because they don't have any obligations and responsibilities like the older people have.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'finally', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'even so', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241106719368 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.144268774704 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114624505929 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592885375494 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0454545454545 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0237154150198 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33177984001 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0098814229249 0.0309702414327 32% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108695652174 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138339920949 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00592885375494 0.0139019557991 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2678.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 466.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74678111588 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281115879828 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197424892704 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109442060086 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0600858369099 0.112833075102 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33177984001 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394849785408 0.524397521467 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6252635585 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0322580645 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0192193631 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3870967742 120.699889404 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0322580645 20.5533526081 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.548387096774 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.7747473349 45.7405998639 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.5873015873 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283018848981 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121295599095 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124293309243 0.0752933317313 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.428853418513 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14645378005 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120399489032 0.114077575197 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128399305863 0.0781384742642 164% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407316813375 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0809344671853 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222444927312 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727262590096 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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