Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
In the way of development, communities play an important role. a variety of communities offer you different benefits. As all know youth is the power of any nation. It also plays an irreplaceable role in communities. its my firm of belief that according to the current situation of young once, they are not able to give enough time to their communities. so many factors are there in support of this statement. few of them described in subsequent paragraphs.
firstly, the main factor which discourage the youth not to communicate with communities, is the time management. youth like students, job holders or working people are not able to save their time for extra curriculum activities like work for societies or any community. Nowadays students have a lots of work burden from school side. they need to attain a 8-9 hours school. my personal experience also support this. during my school days i had to attain 7-8 classes in a single day and had to do a lots of home work. that time it was hard to complete home work on time this made me not able to give enough time to any community. so lack of timing make youth not to give enough time to their community.
additionally, as like students, working people also not able to join or support any communities. in a tight schedule of working hours, they normally feel tired when they get free time. instead of working for any community they prefer to sleep or enjoy their time to some vacation. my own situation make this statement more effective. i am working as a part time in a library for 6-8 hours. some time i need to do extra hours just to pay my tuition fees. this makes me so tired. my own apartment has a community in which all people of society clean the whole society on Sunday. but as i feel tired i am not able to do so. same like me many people also not able to give their time to their society as well as their community.
last but not least, some young people also give their time to their house work as well as they need to look for their younger once. according to a survey, when some question asked to some young people about their communities interaction, they said they need to do house work in their free time as they had working parents. and also need to look for their younger brother sisters. this make them not to interactive with communities.
to sum up all the factors, i strongly believe that young people pay a little role in communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, i feel, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5847826087 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57944745039 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419565217391 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.25 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.90625 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65625 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42885767595 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111741071266 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157094098612 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275725587356 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.233988013421 0.0645574589148 362% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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