In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the city approaches the urbanization, people need more land to development their housing and industry. However, some individuals cannot stand behind this point who say reserving land to be left in its natural is more important than previous view. This essay is going to weigh advantages and disadvantages between of those before recapitulate reasonable conclusion.
Transparently, the good environment benefit people's development continuously because human beings' civilization depend on materials and resources coming from the nature. Were people not for exploring the natural environment, the mankind's civilization would fade away from the horizon. For example, a book, namely A Sand of County Almanac by Aldo Leopold, records the author's observation about some animals which are dispersing gradually due to human beings' activities. Based on this fact, provided all the animals are extinguished, people have no resources to consume. Therefore, establish natural areas benefit people's sustainable development.
Furthermore, land to be left its natural condition provide natural parks for relaxing. Today's people bear the stressful daily work and study, so they need some place to release their strains. Undoubtedly, natural parks are ideal place for people who can clear their mind and do some physical exercise and breath fresh air, so individuals can balance the work and recreation. Thereby, reserving natural condition provide perfect condition for people releasing their stress.
However, some people insist that human beings have a priority to rule the everything of this planet, and thus people should guarantee their standard of life to explore new natural land. But I have to say people do not consider natural circumstance in primitive condition. At present, human beings' civilization experienced great progress from stone age to information time, so people should not concern the basic living standard. In fact, today's people continue to build new house and new plants in order to luxury life, but the whole society have to sacrifice its future. As Aldo Leopold said "Recreational development is a job not of building roads into the lovely country, but of building receptivity into the still unlovely human mind.“
To recapitulate, this essay outweighs reserving natural condition of land against developing housing and industry in natural land. Leaving natural condition benefit people's continuous development and physical and mental health. Additionally, no limit exploring natural land just meets people's luxury desire in modern age, so people should understand controlling themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6887755102 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89087233498 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558673469388 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2724751045 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274290499301 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950031545561 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883330032349 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149397533141 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709527940356 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.