Since the hunter gathered people until today, happiness played significant role in each person’s life. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine its constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have been taken in order to elevate it. Some people may hold the view that happiness in work life is important than social life. However, some other take an opposite side and consider that social life balance people life and it is needless to say being happy is possible without social life. I concur with the latter group and the line below will shed on light my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to mentioned that health reasons which significantly worsened compared to the last decades. There are numerous adverse outcomes living in urban cities such as divorces, mental illness, loneliness. A good friends is cheaper than a therapy and a good conversation is a cure which reduce stress, ease tension and blood sugar. According to the some researches, workers from variety sectors who have strong relationship and good social life live healthier and longer than others.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some word to say is people who is social more balanced in their feelings. Friends help us to forget or solve their problems or conflict by speaking with their community. On the one hand They listen your problems, on the other hand they give different perfective to our issues. Even though, earning lots of money can give to buy some luxury item, It does not make workers happy than friends in times.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are fires one which cross the mind at first glance. They are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Social life which consist of family, friends, hobbies is part of us. People can quit his work or work in different work place but they can not left their social responsibilities.
To wrap it up, contemplating all foresaid reasons, one soon realize that Nobody can live withouıt social life. It is possible to live without happy in work and Happiness is the think the more what you feel the than what you do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96052631579 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55799626179 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586842105263 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3738405919 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7619047619 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229889888813 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053678839517 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590209743584 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109685027795 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459867884174 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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