My Grandfather always says that “Give a man a fish and he will eat for a day. Teach a man to fish and he will eat it for a lifetime”. Thanks to advences in worklife, the schools are being important place in people’s live. And Friends also have important contribitions in our life. If i had to live with roommate I would look for some qualities such as being friendly and responsibility in my roomate. I have several reasons for having that opinion.
First of all, being friendly is one of most important features in a person. If you roomates are friendly you can have enjoyable time such as watching movies, playing video games, playing football. Furhermore, being good friend may lead to study together or pick up exams. For example, when i was a student in university in the USA I had a roommates. He was my best friends in my university. We picked up my exams. If I could graduates this was just because of his help.
Secondly, in addition of the importance of being friendly, I believe that responsibility is also important as well as being friendly. I think everybody should have some rules in their life. These special rules may lead success such as having good carrier, conduct their business having decent house and salary. If roommate have resposibility it can effect on you possitively. For example, I remember that when i was in high school in the USA, one of my friends roomates was so layz. He had a lot of trouble. These effected my friend’s exams. My friend could not studied because of his roomates.
Thirdly, being good cooker is also important but not important as well as the others. If roommate cooks well you do not have to eat out and also waste you money. you can spend money for travel together instead of eating out.
I beleive that being friendly and having responsibility is most important features in a roommate. They may lead positive effect on our life. You can not choose you father or mother or sister but you can choose your roommate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...important contribitions in our life. If i had to live with roommate I would look ...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...her or pick up exams. For example, when i was a student in university in the USA ...
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Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a roommate' or simply 'roommates'?
Suggestion: a roommate; roommates
... student in university in the USA I had a roommates. He was my best friends in my universit...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'graduate'
Suggestion: graduate
...sity. We picked up my exams. If I could graduates this was just because of his help. ...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion of the importance of being friendly, I believe that responsibility is also im...
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Line 6, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...usiness having decent house and salary. If roommate have resposibility it can effe...
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Line 6, column 412, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vely. For example, I remember that when i was in high school in the USA, one of m...
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Line 6, column 569, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
...riend's exams. My friend could not studied because of his roomates. Thirdly, bei...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ve to eat out and also waste you money. you can spend money for travel together ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7836038535 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471590909091 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.352733951 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.037037037 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.037037037 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162190924267 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481937741007 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506982676124 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945235161485 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517720632562 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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