Your school is going to give prize to the best teacher then that teacher should be evaluated by the students or should be by other teachers. Agree or disagree?
Best teacher means not only teaching the students but also give the knowledge of academic as well as general things. Students learn many things from the teachers and also teachers play important role behind the student’s success. Every year schools and colleges give best teacher award. But, it is not good decision that best teacher evaluated by students and other teachers for following reasons.
To begin with, best teacher evaluated by other teachers is more difficult task because of teachers chose close once to maintain their friendship. Students also choose teacher who is liberal and amiable rather than strict and rigid towards them. Students and teachers favoring not by teaching style but their own purposes, consequently, award give to teacher who is not really deserve it. It is causes the negative impact on those who really teaching better and always good thinking for students. For an example, in my college, organize the award ceremony in which students choose best teacher. Most of students choose the biology teacher who is give freedom to students and not strict to on the student’s academic works, as result who teachers are best teaching and work for students were discourage by students decision and negative impact on their minds.
Furthermore, best teachers evaluated by students grade and specific subject knowledge rather than evaluated by students and teachers. Best teacher whose students understand the each lecture and they easily grasp what he was teach. For an example, my maths professor was teaching style is very good and every student’s are easily understand whole concept. His strict nature and teaching style helped to students got the good grade in maths, therefore, evaluated best teacher by student’s grades rather than choose by teachers or students.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, best teacher is who is motivated the students on their study, students understand what he/she teach them and students get a good grade on his subject. All these reasons, I certainly disagree with the statement that best teacher should be appraisal by students and other teachers,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
Best teacher means not only teaching the stu...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...uccess. Every year schools and colleges give best teacher award. But, it is not good deci...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...rs for following reasons. To begin with, best teacher evaluated by other teachers is ...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to close'
Suggestion: to close
...ifficult task because of teachers chose close once to maintain their friendship. Stud...
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Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
...ze the award ceremony in which students choose best teacher. Most of students choose the bi...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...award ceremony in which students choose best teacher. Most of students choose the bi...
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Line 2, column 594, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the students') or simply say ''Most students''.
Suggestion: Most of the students; Most students
... in which students choose best teacher. Most of students choose the biology teacher who is give ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
... academic works, as result who teachers are best teaching and work for students were dis...
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Line 2, column 794, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discouraged'.
Suggestion: discouraged
...est teaching and work for students were discourage by students decision and negative impac...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...tive impact on their minds. Furthermore, best teachers evaluated by students grade an...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...han evaluated by students and teachers. Best teacher whose students understand the e...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...cture and they easily grasp what he was teach. For an example, my maths professor was...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...ood and every student's are easily understand whole concept. His strict nature and te...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...templating all the aforementioned reason, best teacher is who is motivated the student...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
... study, students understand what he/she teach them and students get a good grade on h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, in brief, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34117647059 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66551734171 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6691637487 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390101413345 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172007267015 0.076458572812 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952582086573 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279860463481 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483329239218 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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