Your school has received a gift of money. what do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons to support your choice.
Many teachers and students may spend this money for several things to improve their schools. In my views, I would like to buy the 3 best things for the school: to buy a lot of computers to manage computer room for students and lectures, to built the library and to make playground to relax for all students.
Without a doubt, the many modern technologies can help to improve education in the school such as computer. The computer is mainly important tool both practice and relaxation to students. Moreover, it can be still the computer-assisted instruction : CAI which was taught represent teachers. For example, when i was 7 years old, my mother taught me about basic maths such as algebra; however, i sometime was boring because she cannot convince and more technic same my teacher in the school. In school, almost teachers teach fundamental maths pass many games in the computer, so I am very excited and fun. From the this reason, we can conclude that the computer is effected to concentrate and understand of students and lectures.
Second of all, the library is vital thing for education in all levels from primary school to university. From the famous quote that “ the book is the best friend of education”. Actually, library is the best place for finding new knowledge and reference to do research. For instance, when I was a child, my parents and I always went to community library where is near my home. In the first time, i feel that the library had a quite and a lot of books in many fields such as science, math, cartoon magazine and others, so the environment of library could help me to would like to read a lot of books.
Finally, I believe that after the stress and tired from hard learning in the class, numerous students would like to relax. One of famous place for relax is the playground where may consist of football field for boys and flower park for girls. For example, when i studied in the secondary school in Thailand, i always feel so stress and tired after the maths and science class, and I try to relax by using play soccer with friends. Actually, I am better feel from playing and funny. As a reason, i trusted that the playground is the important place for relaxation of students.
All in all, if the school get gift of money, the school should buy 3 benefit facilities such as computer for teaching of students, the library for research in learning and playground for relaxation after hard study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72790697674 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62129843278 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479069767442 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0843634429 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6315789474 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165682700049 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548655070741 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048080402577 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112254466396 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448011731183 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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