In 1587, the English sent a group of settlers to Roanoke to establish a colony in North America. After returning from a trip to Europe, the Governor of this settlement, John White, found that the entire English colony had disappeared. This disappearance has been the subject of great debate. But, it is no longer a mystery; we now know that the settlers did not disappear but instead relocated to the Island of Croatoa.
First, when White returned he found the word “Croatoa” carved onto a piece of wood. The governor had told the colonists that if they encountered any trouble while he was away, to leave a message indicating where they had gone. This sign indicates that the settlers did not disappear mysteriously but rather relocated to the Croatoan Island. Unfortunately, White’s ship was damaged during his return, so he could not travel to the island to check if the settlers were there.
Second, many English artifacts have been found on Croatoa supporting the idea that the settlers from Roanoke simply relocated to the island. Specifically, a ring was found on the Croatoan Island that can be directly linked back to an Englishman. The only way that this ring could have made its way to the island was if it was brought there by one of the English settlers from Roanoke during their relocation.
Third, when search parties finally arrived on the Croatoan Island to look for the Roanoke settlers, they did not find any but did find that the indigenous inhabitants possessed European characteristics. They had light hair and blue eyes, traits not associated with the natives of North America. The peoples of Croatoa could only have attained these characteristics through intermarriage with the English settlers from Roanoke, providing more conclusive evidence that they relocated to Croatoa.
The article states that the group of English settlers did not disappear but instead relocated
to the island of Croatia and provides three reasons to support the claim. However, the
the professor explains that the reasons are weak to consider as a strong point and refutes each of
author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that governor had told the colonists to leave a message indicating
where they had gone when they were in trouble in absence of him. so, the "Croatoan" carved onto
a piece of wood clearly indicates that they relocated to the Croatoan island. The professor
refutes this point by saying it has no sense. He mentions that settlers were told to go to
interior Of country where they can find food, light, and safety by the governor. Since the
island of croatoa is in the opposite, near the shore, Settlers are less likely to go against the
order of governor's order in hard times.
Second, the article posits that many English artifacts and a ring have been found on the island
supporting the idea of the author. However, the professor says that the ring belonging to English
man found its a way to the island is by trade for food between Croatoan and English settlers in a
harsh conditions.
Finally, the reading asserts that the light hair and blue eyes the traits that are found on
Croatoan island is due to intermarriage with English settler's with native people of the island
because this trait is not associated with natives of the island. The professor opposes this
point by explaining that it was after 100 years this trait is been observed. The reason
the professor gives is that in-between English sent a large number of settlers to the island
for food holding. she adds that the traits could be the reason for intermarriage between this new
english settlers and native peoples and not from what the reading states.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48555451952 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3330298882 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.09492273731 488% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 4.19205298013 954% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203058318403 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769766398244 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451108070655 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653785216158 0.162205337803 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488808895469 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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