The excerpt discusses about the ways to save Torreya trees from being extinct. Experts belive that there are three possible ways to address this dicline. However, the lecturer have the oppositive views on the ways discribed by the experts.
Firstly, the experts are willing to reestablish Torreya trees in the same location. Northen part of Florida have the suitable microclimate for Torreya to grow and in earlier times Torreya flourished in the same region. However, the lecturer says that the situation of microclimates have changed over time because of the global worming. The region of florida has became dry and hence, the Torreya will certainly not groww in that same region.
Secondly, excerpts talk about migrating Torreya to the whole new location with the help of technique know as assisted migration. Experts believe that humans will be helping Torreya return to an environment. Lecturer refutes this by giving an earlier example in which humans have helped Black Locust to return. In that time the Black Locust proliferated so quickly that not only it returened but it also killed so many plants in the nature. Moreover, the plants which were killed by locusts were itself in the catagory of extinction.
Lastly, the experts suggests to keep the remaining of Torreya to the research lab, by this way reserchers will be able to monitor and also conduct research on them. To conflict this, the lecturer points out that research labs contain so many diseas and Torreya will not be able to protect itself from that. In order to protect itself, Torreya needs to be either in large number or in diversity. Because of this Torreya will not survive in research labs as wll.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...obal worming. The region of florida has became dry and hence, the Torreya will certain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00711743772 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45648544482 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7026623269 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06452816374 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174993625725 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679207160761 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574946055928 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106589956309 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388126668673 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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