All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
These days, history is one of the courses which all student pass in college and university. Actually, it becomes a basic course in all majors because of its importance. However, some people believe it's not necessary for all students but I strongly believe that history is important and all students should pass it because of two main reasons.
First of all, by getting history, students become aware of their ancestor, past humans and significant events in the past. actually, history is the best teacher. Because people gain many experiences from history and they can exert them in their life. They can prevent mistakes that may make because of a shortage of information. for instance, Iranian people have experienced war for eight years. They know the destroyable results of war so they never want a new one. on the other hand, if they don't know about the predominant reasons for starting a war, they will not be able to prevent it. while studying history, they will not do impulsive action and they will not bring about a war. So being aware of pas and knowing about history is extremely important.
Second, by studying history, people especially teenagers get familiar whit their myth. Honestly many worthwhile myths exist in the ancient stories. These myths are so important because they make the culture of a society and students should learn them by reading history books. while if these stories don't repeat for generations, they will forget in the near future. For example, Iranian people used to see their family and parents on the first day of the new year. It was a rewarding habit and now, many Iranian people visit their family on that day because they have learned it from history books which study in school and university. while this habit will forget if students don't study history.
In conclusion, I believe that history is necessary for all people and school and university is the best place to study it. All students should get it because history learned them many worthwhile experiences whiteout any cost. All people should know about their myths and pas culture of their country and the best way to achieve this aim is studying history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, honestly, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 367.0 270.72406181 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89100817439 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41940065789 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460490463215 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6614157321 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5909090909 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23360747697 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789220033435 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600216534918 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178425623052 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679273269379 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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