Both the reading passage and a lecturer support the idea of transitioning to a renewable energy sources, solar energy in particular. Professor elaborates on arguments made in a reading passage.
First benefit described in a reading is an ecological aspect of solar panels. While we rely on fossil fuels today, amount of oil and natural gas is diminishing due to the high consumption rate. Professor mentions that in order to produce a solar panel humanity still needs to use fossils, but he also mentions that electricity generated by such a panel during it lifespan far outweights the amont of energy needed for it's production in the first place.
Another advantage mentioned in the article is absence of side-effects during solar panel usage. In contrast to high level of noise and fog generated by current energy sources, solar panels are completely silent and don't produce any harmful effects on surrounding world. Lecturer also mentions ecological benefits, but he extends his arguments to mentioning that alternative energy sources are privately held due to the process of privatization. This means, that solar panels in particular aren't a waste of money, despite high costs needed for an initial installation, mainly because owners will enjoy the long lifespan of their operational cycle and freedom related to their usage.
Final argument made in the passage is cost benefits. While one-time purchase is beneficial, professor goes further by mentioning other financial benefits, like the possibility to sell overgenerated electricity to energy companies, as there is a high chance that amount of energy generated by such a panel will exceed the needs of their owners. Another financial incentive mentions by lecturer is tax benefits which are provided by governments in order to facilitate transitioning from fossil fuels to alternative energy sources.
Taking into account arguments made by author of the text and by professor during his speech, it seems evident that solar panels must become a new norm in terms of how society should generate electricity it needs.
- Although it s a new technology solar energy provides benefits to the entire world First solar energy eliminates our reliance on non renewable fossil fuels Additionally solar energy is non pollutant which makes it better for everyone Finally there is almos 80
- Although it s a new technology solar energy provides benefits to the entire world First solar energy eliminates our reliance on non renewable fossil fuels Additionally solar energy is non pollutant which makes it better for everyone Finally there is almos 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... solar panels are completely silent and dont produce any harmful effects on surround...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urrounding world. Lecturer also mentions ecological benefits, but he extends his ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... means, that solar panels in particular arent a waste of money, despite high costs ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, while, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32424242424 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87196799837 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 145.348785872 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1656549806 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24702369857 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936894176954 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635947344991 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14612091978 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435809903952 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.8541721854 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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