The reading and the lecture are both about rhinoceros horns. More specifically, the writers put forth the idea that Rhinos is exhausted to extinct because the hunters kill this animal and take their horns, so the lecturer provides three solutions for this problem. In the listening passage, the lecturer is quick to point out that there are some serious flaws in the writer's claims. In fact, the professor believes this solutions have significant weaknesses and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states dehorn the wildlife Rhinos by remove its horns to make these animals less attractive to the hunters. The article mentions that remove the horns from this animal using medical procedure and decent strategy will help to solve this problem. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that this solution is not practical, and if the animal can find this amount of support from helping surgery, so instead of that they can help to protect these animals. Additionally, he points out that Rhinos using there horns to protect their young and dig from water.
Secondly, the author suggests that educate the consumers of the horns about the false believe about the benefits of take keratin. In the article it is said that if people have a good knowledge about this fact they will not buy this horns. Again, the speaker specifically asserts in this idea by states this solution is not practical because people have strong believe about these advantages. He goes on to say that if consumers have a very old and strong believe, so it is not easily to convince them to change their mind.
Finally, the author brings his argument to a close by suggesting that government should make sail these horns legally, so the the price of these products will be low and this process of selling will stop. not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that if the government allow to do this process, as a result the demand for horns will increase. He notes that the hunters will continue kill this animal because the government made a attractive market for the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...claims. In fact, the professor believes this solutions have significant weaknesses a...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ledge about this fact they will not buy this horns. Again, the speaker specifically ...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ot practical because people have strong believe about these advantages. He goes on to s...
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Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...if consumers have a very old and strong believe, so it is not easily to convince them t...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...hould make sail these horns legally, so the the price of these products will be low and...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...hould make sail these horns legally, so the the price of these products will be low and...
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Line 6, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... and this process of selling will stop. not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue ...
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Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...contending that if the government allow to do this process, as a result the demand fo...
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Line 6, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...this animal because the government made a attractive market for the consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91081081081 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43484114973 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481081081081 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0616835917 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135375447227 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510971206922 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048074978912 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870226013803 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371622985911 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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