Undoubtedly, History of bees on the world is a controversial thing among the scientist. More specifically, the writer cast doubt on the existence of bees on earth from 200 million years ago. However, the professor points out that there are some serious flaw in the passage. She explain clearly why there's bees at that period.
To begin with, the writer claims that bees may not exist since there was no bees' fossil dated to 200 million years ago. The speakers says that there's no suitable condition for bees' remain forming a fossil. The bees can form a fossil when is covered by resin, and the tree producing resin is rare at that time.
Second, the writer mentions that there's no flowering plants at that time and since the flowering plants usually forms a mutually dependent relationship, it's unlikely that bees appeared at that time. The professor, again, give an alternative hypothesis to refute this problem. The professor speculates that early bees may feed on non-flowering plant, they may adapted to the flowering plants later.
Another question the writer proposed is that the modern bees' nest chambers ate closed by caps that have a spiral pattern, while the fossil found in Arizona doesn't posses such finer structures. The professor found that although the modern bees' nest chamber and the ancient one differs in form, they shared the same water-proof material.
In conclusion, the writer and the professor have different opinion on the history of bees and the professor provide more convincing evidence to support her claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'flaws'?
Suggestion: flaws
... points out that there are some serious flaw in the passage. She explain clearly why...
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'explains'.
Suggestion: explains
...e some serious flaw in the passage. She explain clearly why theres bees at that period....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...in the passage. She explain clearly why theres bees at that period. To begin with, ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bees'' or 'bee's'?
Suggestion: bees'; bee's
...t bees may not exist since there was no bees fossil dated to 200 million years ago. ...
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Message: You should probably use 'say'.
Suggestion: say
... to 200 million years ago. The speakers says that theres no suitable condition for b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...llion years ago. The speakers says that theres no suitable condition for bees remain f...
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Suggestion: there's
...me. Second, the writer mentions that theres no flowering plants at that time and si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07450980392 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54601935045 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3792959096 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268755004612 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994931810718 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953339878698 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149460475509 0.162205337803 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854131537738 0.0443174109184 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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