according to the passage the main concern is if bees were in existance on this planet 200 milion ago or not. the passage represents some points given by the non-believers of the existance while the lecture gives counter to those very points
the 1st doubt mentioned in the passage is that no fossil of remnants of bees were found more than 100 million years old.as the counter logic the lecture insists that it does not necessarily mean that there was no bee before this period. The lecture highlights the possibility that bees from more than 100 million ago might have found no suitable tree to make nest and therefore had any other place of living.
the second point mentioned in the passage is that there was no signature of existance of flowering plants 200 million years ago. And so the passage asserts that because of the mutual dependency of bees and flowering plants,it is unlikely for bees to exist in absence of flowering plants. In the counter against this point, the lecture reflected on the possibility that before 125 million years ago bees could have depended on non-flowering plants which evolved and turned into the dependency on flowering plants.
The third point presented in the passage is that the structure of the nest of bees varies between the fossilized and modern bees and it focused on a difference to support this point. But the lecture insisted that even if the structure varies, the material used to make modern nest are same kind of the fossilized nest.
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task Animal fossils usually provide very little opportunity to study the actual animal tissues, because in fossils the animals' living tissues have been largely replaced by minerals. Thus, scientists were very excited recently 90
- "We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning." 66
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes littl 49
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes littl 58
- in order to find the memo 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
according to the passage the main concern is if b...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e on this planet 200 milion ago or not. the passage represents some points given by...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...erefore had any other place of living. the second point mentioned in the passage i...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... dependency of bees and flowering plants,it is unlikely for bees to exist in absenc...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, therefore, third, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46586807658 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48828125 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4482690252 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 110.228320801 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294536862137 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137760858046 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385665316909 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1688236785 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381176801774 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.3589403974 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.8541721854 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.