When it comes to basic science courses, there are many elementary courses in different fields. Thus, whether the requirement of taking basic science courses would be an issue for all college students. In my opinion, I do agree with the statement. The reasons for my taking this position are as follows.
To begin with, comprehensively studying courses in different fields can facilitate students be able to solve real-world questions. In other words, all problems in the real world involve different kinds of basic knowledge, which is difficult for students only taking courses in their profession. For example, One of my friend, Jerry, was a computer science major student. As we know, the courses in the computer science department must be related to computers. Nevertheless, Jerry had to take physic courses when he was a freshman. He was still wondering why he had to take this course not until he started to be a computer games designer as his career. In the game world, he had to simulate the gravity effect as presenting in the real world. Therefore, he had to formulate an equation for computer programs to mimic gravity. That was a key feature for human beings playing games as they were in the real world. Therefore, taking basic science courses may help students to prepare for real-world problems. That is a reason for supporting my ideas.
Moreover, basic science courses can intrigue students' interests in different areas. To be more specific, students who are not really interested in their own profession may have chances to understand other fields. For example, when I was a freshman in college, my classmate, Jason, was not glad to enroll in our department. Jason was a hard-working student when he was in senior high school. He always studied very late at night in order to get admission to the leading universities. Eventually, he got the offer from National Taiwan University, which is the top school in Taiwan. However, he could not find his interests in the first semester because he spent all his leisure time to study. Once he had the chance to study fundamental computer science courses and finance lectures due to the requirement for all students, he found his true interest and transferred to finance major from the physic department. After transferring into the finance department, he spent a lot of time studying finance related courses and even doing research projects with the professor. Thus, students are able to find their own interests by taking elementary courses in different fields. I would support the claim based on the aforementioned reason.
To sum up, basic science courses for students in different studying areas can benefit students by evoking their interests and training skills. Students are able to find a novel insight out of their professions. With the previous reasons, I firmly do agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 30.3222958057 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 22.0 5.01324503311 439% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1373.03311258 175% => OK
No of words: 473.0 270.72406181 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07188160677 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78972530949 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 145.348785872 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 419.366225166 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 13.0662251656 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.731891027 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.724137931 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3103448276 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27586206897 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290954561291 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917616069751 0.0996497079465 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791839717709 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237383262068 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069762571178 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 63.6247240618 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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