Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in life are free. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In today’s global world, people have a plethora of options around them to make them feel better. But most of the things in this world have a cost. However, the best things in life are free. And there are a lot of reasons for that.
Firstly, every man wants to be happy and happiness doesn’t have a price associated with it. It is up to a person to look into himself and achieve his inner peace. The Buddhist monks don’t live a lavish lifestyle but they are happy and peaceful with themselves and the people around themselves. When a person is happy with himself he tends to share his happiness with others. In my case, I tend to live cheerfully because I have a lot to give and when I don’t love myself I won’t be able to love others. Problems are a part of everyone’s life and one is able to solve it better when they are happy. If the great scientist Einstein wasn’t happy with himself or his work he wouldn’t have been able to give his theory of general relativity to the mankind.
Secondly, knowledge too doesn’t come with any cost involved with it. Most of the situations requires a certain degree of knowledge and wisdom comes from knowledge. Elder people have so much knowledge, they are able to guide other people to solve their problems in life. Imagination is what makes one wonder. Without knowing about a certain event or a thing one cannot imagine about it. For instance, when a student learns something, he imagines about that subject. That unlocks his ability to see beyond what is visible to our eyes.
In conclusion, the beautiful things in life do not come with any cost. Happiness and knowledge are wonderful and inherent things but they don’t have a price tag associated with them. Thus, it is of utmost importance that focus more on the things that are inside them rather than outside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... happy and peaceful with themselves and the people around themselves. When a person is happy with himself he...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elves and the people around themselves. When a person is happy with himself he tends...
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Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...apos;s life and one is able to solve it better when they are happy. If the great scien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74233128834 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62484933226 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4288860904 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.619047619 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11999930581 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487509146412 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686140259367 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094522202621 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458940007568 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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