Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Coaches are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different ways of learning, such as attending educational institutions, taking online classes and private tutors. There may raise a debate on private tutoring, but I believe coaches dose a tremendous activity to impact our lives by sharping us to the next tomorrow.
According to Forbs, it states that "Global Private tutoring market will surpass by 102.8 billion dollars by 2018." This may raise concerns why students demand more private tutoring than the classroom. In my option, students find it hard to focus on a plethora of students, because of the tight timeframes for different subjects, makes it difficult for students to bouns back to concentrating. As a result, time flexibility with private tutors helps students to be more focused and thereby increase their productivity.
Secondly, I believe/Quote "People will trade their money for things that they find more valuable than the money they just spend." Having said that, private tutors may come with a cost, but coaches have no framed syllabus. Therefore they take extra effort to help us find our goals in life by teaching us good habits and make us successful citizen in the world. This may urge why Coaches are the best teachers.
Finally. The reason for students to demand tutors over the classroom is due to the distractions from their colleagues in class. As a result, this makes students reach for different alternatives. Like myself faced the same phenomena, where my grades dropped because I couldn't concentrate on the course. As a result, I look other different alternative measures to pick up my level, therefore considering a private tutor was my substitute for the classroom, this helped me to catch up grads and be head of the class.
Inclusion, coaches are the best substitute for the classroom, they can help us to pick up our grades. Where we tend to be more productive and feel more friendly around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85104463844 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4172024423 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054074400925 0.272083759551 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265649126922 0.0996497079465 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437104253768 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033992194892 0.162205337803 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232150750076 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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