I think that it is important to discuss this topic because it occupies a large space in our busy levies.
Some people argue the idea of celebrating occasions in traditional, well-known ways because it is no longer popular while others oppose this claim.
In my point of view, I would disagree with the above-mentioned statement.
I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, every nation has festivals that distinguish it from other nations. These festivals are an integral part of the country's culture, which spans a long history.
As a result, most civilizations tend to celebrate in the same way that their forefathers did, that is, by performing all of the rituals associated with the event.
For example in some countries like mine, people celebrate the co-called "Nowruz Festival" People are here even today, use stunning flowers to decorate their homes and streets, as well as make various types of food and sweets. Furthermore, some people dress up in unique costumes for this occasion.
I can say that the " NOWRUZ Festival" is one of the most important events people are waiting for because it gives them the opportunity to feel the connection between generations.
To continue, it is well-common that most people in the twenty-first century are busy with work, study, or travel and look forward to such occasions to celebrate them, and the best way to do it is in the same way they did when they were younger, as a manner of reviving great memories with family and relatives.
From what I have deliberated above, I reckon that the traditional approach to holiday celebrations is still important for our community. This is because it allows us to feel close to our families and reminds us that we are all citizens of the same country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...forefathers did, that is, by performing all of the rituals associated with the event. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, look, so, still, well, while, for example, i feel, i reckon, i think, as a result, as well as, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97741935484 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88077520206 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4091981854 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.09492273731 244% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166137071107 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053560102757 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483963223577 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628004662356 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424158278336 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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