do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, traveling in a group is rapidly increased with a high slope. This could be caused by several reasons. I think the main reason that has attracted people to travel in a group is the cost of booking for a hotel or flight is lower than a reserve in an individual form. Also having a tour leader help people to use their time more efficient in the travel, as the tour leader is responsible to do whatever is necessary for travelers to have a good trip. For instance, by introducing enthusiastic places and customs of the destination city, people feel more comfortable since it does not need for them to waste their time for making familiar with these issues. Also, they may think if they get into the trouble in a foreign city or country there is a person who could help and support them. One other bright pros of traveling in a group that catch peoples mind would be, they think traveling in a group cause fare better than traveling in an individual form since the amount of travelers make a good opportunity for them to speak together on an airplane or bus and making friend from this chance and enjoy more during the travel. But someone thinks that this may have drawbacks, their reason is, as they travel in a group they do not have that authority to choose what to do in every hour of the trip and they should obey the group decision.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for increasing the amount of traveling in a group in recent years which aforementioned before. And I think the most important incentive signal for traveling in this form is the cost saving that happens by traveling in this way. As mentioned before it may have some cons but in summation, the weight of the advantages is higher than drawbacks and because of that people tend to travel in a group more than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r than a reserve in an individual form. Also having a tour leader help people to use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53067484663 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47527006059 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1802242329 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 110.228320801 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1719345094 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759089707713 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429663028392 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140554191706 0.162205337803 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198126270459 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.0289183223 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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