Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
running toward the cutting edge of the complex society, young people has been constantly influenced by modern device for instance social networks, tv and same others due to its significant, so nowadays young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. i vividly subscribe to the first idea based on some reasons among which young people have presence at type of conventions, social networks, watch educational shows, emotional and dramatic series.
first, the most obvious reasons stand for my point of view is that have presence at type of official planning, cultural convention and take more information about world out. it is apparent,even at the most transitory glance that young people have more resource of useful different information which they can improve their insight to live and give better decision for themselves. a complete and comprehensive survey published in nature journal in 2015 indicates that in technology era young people are leaders in a family not parents, in reality gone are the days parent were total awareness in a family. hence it is irrefutable that ...
another equally important reason is that .... it is beyond doubt that ... let us assume that ... therefore ...
last but not least ... as far as ... are concerned .... consequently ...
i have come to conclusion that ... to recapitulate succinctly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3661971831 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7373571566 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.540411800872 125% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 89.7390095987 49.2860985944 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130542452775 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278374683606 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034120525846 0.0662205650399 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532753446505 0.162205337803 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451386179203 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.