The professor and the author are both talking about Endotherms animal. According to the reading passage, dinosaurs are suspected as endotherms however the speaker refutes this opinion. The follow three points made in the lecture support her opinion.
First of all, the lecturer says that even we have found the dinosaurs fossils in polar area, it was not a cold much. The author thinks that the dinosaurs as reptiles could not maintain their body temperature. However, the professor casts doubt about they might migrate to warm region or even hiberate when it gets colder in the winter.
Second, about leg position and movement. It has been considerated as to sustain their physical activities such as running but the professor claims that the legs are needed to support their body weight because they are know as large creature.
Lastly, the speaker states that there is a structure called Haversian canals which is helping them to grow quickly. Moreover, it has shown that the main fact of endothermy characteristic. As the professor says that there is one more structure the dinosaurs have called growth rings. Usually, growth rings let them grow slowly during the cold period. Hence, the dinosaurs take time to become larger.
In conclusion, the professor disagrees with the ideas made in the reading passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...wever the speaker refutes this opinion. The follow three points made in the lecture suppor...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...port their body weight because they are know as large creature. Lastly, the speak...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...main fact of endothermy characteristic. As the professor says that there is one mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, lastly, moreover, second, so, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16744186047 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49850144378 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1803782628 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3571428571 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133228875031 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402769565308 0.0996497079465 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424076582461 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630009662121 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386573707908 0.0443174109184 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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