Essay topics: TPO-45 - Integrated Writing Task
Any student of paleontology will be struck by the fact that a great many animals of the past were considerably larger than they are today. This holds true for species ranging from dinosaurs to most mammals. Just why they were so large calls for some explanation. A rough consensus has been reached on the following points.
The first is that the large size of the animals must be due to the early earth’s greater supply of oxygen. It is held by some reputable biologists that an oxygen-rich environment stimulates growth within a species and produces an array of large animal varieties.
A second point is that the abundant plant life on the early earth must have provided all species with plenty of nutrients. As biologists now know, adequate nutrition is vital for animals to fully grow. It is believed that this size increase gets genetically transmitted over generations. Thus, so long as the food supply remains adequate, animal species will tend to get bigger over time.
Finally, some researchers believe that the early earth’s warm climate tended to stimulate growth. Since the animals did not expend much energy to stay warm, the extra energy could be channeled into generating cells needed for larger bodies. Taking this view, the high oxygen levels, abundant food and warm weather all converged to produce animals of considerably larger dimensions than is the norm today.
The reading claims that the bees can't be preserved for 200- million-years like the argument of the fossil record in the Arizona in southwestern United States and give three reason for this argument. While, the lecturer on the other hand casts doubt this view and says that it is completely is possible the bees's record fossil be for 200 million years age, be rejecting of three reading claims.
The first reason of the reading is that, there are not any record of the actual bees in the fossils, so it is not materialized that the nest have been for bees. However, the lecturer claims that it is nor very crucial problem, because the bees must be protected by some spacial kind of the rezin which is produced by some specific trees. So, it is so feasible that that spacial kind of the tree did not appear that time and apparently the bees can not be preserved by any things, but it can't be the reason of impossibilitity.
The lecturer also is not convinced by the absence of flowering plants for reason of impossibility. He says that before of the first flowering plants was appearing about 125 million years a go, the bees were appeared and they eat the other kind of the plants like punchery when they did not and could not use the flowering plants and after some year of the appearance of the flowering planets they use them as a step of their evolutionary process. So, this reason is not true either.
Finally, the lecture claims is that the structures of the modern nests and old kind of that. He says that in the opposite side of the reading claim, the structure of modern and old bee's colony have a same kind of the waterproofing material and it will be the cause of the possibility of the 200 million years bees are existed on the earth.
conclusively, it can be said that the bees have been existed on the plane for long time and the fossil records are incredibly important and reasonable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
The reading claims that the bees cant be preserved for 200- million-years lik...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... not be preserved by any things, but it cant be the reason of impossibilitity. Th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
... not be preserved by any things, but it cant be the reason of impossibilitity. Th...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpossibility. He says that before of the first flowering plants was appearing abo...
^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t before of the first flowering plants was appearing about 125 million years a go, the bees ...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bees'' or 'bee's'?
Suggestion: bees'; bee's
... claim, the structure of modern and old bees colony have a same kind of the waterpro...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conclusively
...ears bees are existed on the earth. conclusively, it can be said that the bees have been...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, however, if, so, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55523255814 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50811116576 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438953488372 0.540411800872 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2456167153 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 21.698381199 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1465952795 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677264806336 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227057648078 0.0662205650399 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866853580599 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266556593705 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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