Essay topics: TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
If I want to declear my idea about the importancity of konwing about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that, they will affect my daily life, undoubtly I would say that I think it is better that I know about that events. I will explain my idea by repretent of three spatcial and to the point reason andd examples.
First point I would like to make is that as I study and work the spacial field of study, economics, so it is required that my aknwoledge about the event all around the wolrd be updated and suruounded. For example, the finantioacrisis which is very important phenemena all around the world and based on their deptes, they always have significants and impressive concequences on the life of the thousand people all around the world, is one of the most important and accutive examples of an events without impact on my daily life im my country, which is very important to me to know it very carefully and at the all aspect of that.
second point I would like to make is that the impact of knowing the different events and reaction to that events by peoples, goverments, or global organisations and etc. , on my knowledge about the corrects and redicolous policies at the occasionally situations. For example, the eathquake.this is an natural phenomena which is very popualar all around the worlds, since the east asia-like japan, korea etc. to the latin america- like mexico, cuba,etc. so, when an erthquake is happend one place like Japan and I know all the aspects of that, like the first-aid or helping at the firsts seconds by the government to the long run policies like the beuldings supportive policies, all of them will help me to increace my information about this events that in some days ago ane like that had happened at my country and the shirt run and long run policies were awefull and the rate of mortharithe was at the crisis point. So, this analises is brinking by the comperition betweeen this two event and the reaction to that.
finally, at the meduim run this work will make as a habitt for me and it will be an intertainment for me to know whhat spacial event where and why is happend and the global reaction ar the local reaction of the people or inistitutes will be how. so it is funny at a kind of the point of the view.
At the end I think a lot of people dont like to know such things whch maybe have a bad things or good thing, but for me it is not just choice but it is an requirment for my professional live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k the spacial field of study, economics, so it is required that my aknwoledge abo...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an event' or simply 'events'?
Suggestion: an event; events
...most important and accutive examples of an events without impact on my daily life im my c...
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Suggestion: Second
...fully and at the all aspect of that. second point I would like to make is that the ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...es, goverments, or global organisations and etc. , on my knowledge about the corrects an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rments, or global organisations and etc. , on my knowledge about the corrects and ...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ons. For example, the eathquake.this is an natural phenomena which is very popuala...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...ample, the eathquake.this is an natural phenomena which is very popualar all around the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...natural phenomena which is very popualar all around the worlds, since the east as...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
... to the latin america- like mexico, cuba,etc. so, when an erthquake is happend one p...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...elp me to increace my information about this events that in some days ago ane like t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... two event and the reaction to that. finally, at the meduim run this work will make ...
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Suggestion: So
... the people or inistitutes will be how. so it is funny at a kind of the point of t...
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Suggestion: don't
.... At the end I think a lot of people dont like to know such things whch maybe hav...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... know such things whch maybe have a bad things or good thing, but for me it is not jus...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... for me it is not just choice but it is an requirment for my professional live.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48785871965 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60886788839 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448123620309 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.399947569 48.9658058833 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.384615385 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8461538462 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181582719734 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672227093506 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831685807072 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117237951249 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871020306621 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.