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Both the reading and the lecturer talking about variation in physical characteristics. In the reading states that environment influence to human and animal growth rates due to environmental condition. In contrast, the lecturer argues that several factors impact to human and animal growth which is nutrition that they consume. The professor points out that three main argument casts doubt the reading made claims.
To begin with, in the reading states that organism has growth under condition of environment including biological factors. Moreover, environment has positive impact directed to animal and human body which is internal body structure. however, the professor refutes with the author of the reading. he points out that daily handling such as hugging, touching, and massaging can promote healthy growth and immunity boosting. It more efficiency rather than environment that the reading mentioned.
Secondly, according to the reading claims that non-living organism formative stage of life. physical and mental enhances characteristic of adult which is young because environmental factors are necessary for characteristics express with their life. however, the lecturer refutes the statement made by the reading. he says that living organism they have sufficient with nutritious early their life can have long living. In addition, if they have shortage with food this will decreased the rate of birth and small size of the body.
Finally, the reading states that early life of animal affected by the various growth and resistance various type of stress and environmental direct influence for learning progressive and behaviore recation in animal and human. However, the professor arguing with the reading. He states that poor eating habit and lact of nutition deficiency charecteristic don't live well and don't learn well several behavior link with poor eating habit.
>Both the reading and the lecturer talking about variation in physical characteristics. In the reading states that environment influence to human and animal growth rates due to environmental condition. In contrast, the lecturer argues that several factors impact to human and animal growth which is nutrition that they consume. The professor points out that three main argument casts doubt the reading made claims. To begin with, in the reading states that organism has growth under condition of environment including biological factors. moreover, environment has positive impact directed to animal and human body which is internal body structure. however, the professor refutes with the author of the reading. he points out that daily handling such as hugging, touching, and massaging can promote healthy growth and immunity boosting. it more efficiency efficiency " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">rather thansize: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap;"> environment that the reading mentioned. oth the reading and the lecturer talking about variation in physical characteristics. In the reading states that environment influence to human and animal growth rates due to environmental condition. In contrast, the lecturer argues that several factors impact to human and animal growth which is nutrition that they consume. The professor points out that three main argument casts doubt the reading made claims. To begin with, in the reading states that organism has growth under condition of environment including biological factors. moreover, environment has positive impact directed to animal and human body which is internal body structure. however, the professor refutes with the author of the reading. he points out that daily handling such as hugging, touching, and massaging can promote healthy growth and immunity boosting. it more efficiency rather than environment that the reading mentioned. secondly, according to the reading claims that non-living organism formative stage of life. physical and mental enhances characteristic of adult which is young because environmental factors are necessary for characteristics express with their life. however, the lecturer refutes the statement made by the reading. he says that living organism they have sufficient with nutritious early their life can have long living. In addition, if they have shortage with food this will decreased the rate of birth and small size of the body. finally, the reading states that early life of animal affected by the various growth and resistance various type of stress and environmental direct influence for learning progressive and behaviore recation in animal and human. however, the professor arguing with the reading. he states that poor eating habit and lact of nutition deficiency charecteristic don't live well and don't learn well several behavior link with poor eating habit. secondly, according to the reading claims that non-living organism formative stage of life. physical and mental enhances characteristic of adult which is young because environmental factors are necessary for characteristics express with their life. however, the lecturer refutes the statement made by the reading. he says that living organism they have have " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">sufficientsize: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> with nutritious early their life can have long living. In addition, if they have shortage with food this will decreased the rate of birth and small size of the body. finally, the reading states that early life of animal affected by the various growth and resistance various type of stress and environmental direct influence for learning progressive and behaviore recation in animal and human. however, the professor arguing with the reading. he states that poor eating habit and lact of nutition deficiency charecteristic don't live well and don't learn well several behavior link with poor eating habit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...vironment including biological factors. moreover, environment has positive impact direct...
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Suggestion: However
... body which is internal body structure. however, the professor refutes with the author ...
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Suggestion: He
...refutes with the author of the reading. he points out that daily handling such as ...
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Suggestion: It
...e healthy growth and immunity boosting. it more efficiency efficiency ' style...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: efficiency
...y growth and immunity boosting. it more efficiency efficiency ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Oth
...environment that the reading mentioned. oth the reading and the lecturer talking ab...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...vironment including biological factors. moreover, environment has positive impact direct...
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... body which is internal body structure. however, the professor refutes with the author ...
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...refutes with the author of the reading. he points out that daily handling such as ...
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...e healthy growth and immunity boosting. it more efficiency rather than environment...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...environment that the reading mentioned. secondly, according to the reading claims that n...
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Suggestion: Physical
...iving organism formative stage of life. physical and mental enhances characteristic of a...
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Suggestion: However
...haracteristics express with their life. however, the lecturer refutes the statement mad...
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Suggestion: He
...utes the statement made by the reading. he says that living organism they have suf...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
... they have shortage with food this will decreased the rate of birth and small size of the...
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Suggestion: Finally
...te of birth and small size of the body. finally, the reading states that early life of ...
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Suggestion: However
...behaviore recation in animal and human. however, the professor arguing with the reading...
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Suggestion: He
...the professor arguing with the reading. he states that poor eating habit and lact ...
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Suggestion: don't
...t of nutition deficiency charecteristic dont live well and dont learn well several b...
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Suggestion: don't
...iency charecteristic dont live well and dont learn well several behavior link with p...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun behavior seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some behavior'.
Suggestion: some behavior
...stic dont live well and dont learn well several behavior link with poor eating habit. secondly, ...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...l behavior link with poor eating habit. secondly, according to the reading claims that n...
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Suggestion: Physical
...iving organism formative stage of life. physical and mental enhances characteristic of a...
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Suggestion: However
...haracteristics express with their life. however, the lecturer refutes the statement mad...
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Suggestion: He
...utes the statement made by the reading. he says that living organism they have hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...ding. he says that living organism they have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... he says that living organism they have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
... they have shortage with food this will decreased the rate of birth and small size of the...
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Suggestion: Finally
...te of birth and small size of the body. finally, the reading states that early life of ...
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Suggestion: However
...behaviore recation in animal and human. however, the professor arguing with the reading...
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...t of nutition deficiency charecteristic dont live well and dont learn well several b...
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Suggestion: don't
...iency charecteristic dont live well and dont learn well several behavior link with p...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun behavior seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some behavior'.
Suggestion: some behavior
...stic dont live well and dont learn well several behavior link with poor eating habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 7.30242825607 383% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 28.0 12.0772626932 232% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 32.0 5.01324503311 638% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3546.0 1373.03311258 258% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 606.0 270.72406181 224% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85148514851 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.04702891845 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23655711917 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.280528052805 0.540411800872 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1035.0 419.366225166 247% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 2.5761589404 505% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 13.0662251656 260% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.522087436 49.2860985944 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.294117647 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61764705882 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 4.19205298013 811% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.27373068433 328% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285675281143 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108289505225 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141806041116 0.0662205650399 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285675281143 0.162205337803 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 12.2367328918 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.42419426049 80% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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