The reading and the lecture are both about the golden frog that is in threat because of fungus that affect the frog crucial life functions. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer presents three theories about how to preserve these frogs. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that these solutions are not effective and will not protect the frog's population.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states there is a type of bacterium that have the ability to work against the fungus by killing its cells. The article mentions that establishing colonies of the bacterium on the frog's skin can solve the issue. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that this solution will not work because the effect of the bacterium did not last for long time. Additionally, he points out that these chemicals attack fungus in the beginning of the colony then it stop protecting the frogs.
Secondly, the author suggests breefing the frogs in captivity then emitting them in the wild that helps to make frogs lack of diseases. In the article it is said that the new population will be healthy and free from this desase. Again, the professor specifically addresses this point when he states the new frogs will not stay healthy because the other animals in the wild have the same disease. He goes on to say that this method will not work at all.
Finally, the author brings his argument to a close by suggesting that frogs have self defense against these fungus by raising their temperature which decrease the fungus grows. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that this method has big cons on the frogs because it use a lot of energy from the frogs which weakenes them. He notes that this way may protect the frogs from these plants, but will affect their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'frogs'' or 'frog's'?
Suggestion: frogs'; frog's
... not effective and will not protect the frogs population. First and foremost, the au...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stops'?
Suggestion: stops
... in the beginning of the colony then it stop protecting the frogs. Secondly, the au...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fungus' or 'these fungi', 'these funguses'?
Suggestion: this fungus; these fungi; these funguses
...ng that frogs have self defense against these fungus by raising their temperature which decr...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
...od has big cons on the frogs because it use a lot of energy from the frogs which we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78816199377 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39218666504 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.27120667 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204201066417 0.272083759551 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710321907645 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738520478275 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136959537839 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380167109698 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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