The article states that the method of cloud seeding in the usage of deduction of hail are efficient in the agricultural sector in some regions with three factors. The lecture disputes that are not clearly beneficial in the problem for farming.
To begin with, the author states that the chemical iodide are added to the vapor near close to the freezing point can occur the light snow and helpful in the laboratory state. The lecturer refuses that matter by putting on the iodide remove all of the particles in the cloud like snow and rain, that is lead to absence of water and demange the crops.
Secondly, the writer describes that the cloud seeding method could manipulate and capable in the urban area of some Asia countries. However, the lecturer argues that this process cannot be successful in the United States because the farming area in there is outside of the city and there is no air pollution and the cloud seeding can solely react with the air pollution to outcome good result.
Finally, in the local studies, the author explains that the monitoring of crop can be performed by the cloud seeding that decrease the amount of hail in yearly data. Even so, according to professor, this system has no effective and the changes of neighborhood weather is the actual factor for reducing the damage of crop.
To sum up, the articles state that the cloud seeding technique can be benefit in the the United States farming but the professor contradict that the various kinds of aspect.
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- Hail pieces of ice that form and fall from clouds instead of snow or rain has always been a problem for farmers in some areas of the United States Hail pellets can fall with great force and destroy crops in the field Over the last few decades a met 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... matter by putting on the iodide remove all of the particles in the cloud like snow and ra...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing area in there is outside of the city and there is no air pollution and the c...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... city and there is no air pollution and the cloud seeding can solely react with ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...oud seeding technique can be benefit in the the United States farming but the professor...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...oud seeding technique can be benefit in the the United States farming but the professor...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, second, secondly, so, even so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79457364341 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34406415027 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523255813953 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1338202282 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.444444444 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222574059374 0.272083759551 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883224894469 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284168306499 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119555364651 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202570876247 0.0443174109184 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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