Is homeschooling compatible with better than traditional schooling

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Is homeschooling compatible with/better than traditional schooling?

Education is viewed as an essential part in every child's life, and without it kids will not acquire the abilities to question and wonder about the different things around the world. Nowadays, many parents attempt to look for the best schools so their children will grow up to be strong and knowledgable. When it comes to education there are two ways in which kids can learn from. First, the public schooling then the homeschooling. While for some it may sound as a good idea to enroll their kids in a public school, for others it is not
To begin with, the homeschooling provides young kids with the freedom to express themselves. Instead of being scared and shy to express their ideas, kids can easily do so when they are studying with their parents. As a matter of fact, studying at home helps those kids to be confident enough to face the world. In addition to the freedom of expression, homeschooling can help students learn comfortably. Unlike the public schooling where there are exams ,quizes and limited time to do things ,homeschooling is utterly the opposite because it doesn't involve exams, or quizes as much as it depends on how comfortable students are.
Sometimes public schools can help students better. when it comes to the children, there are some skills that are needed to be acquired such as the social and lunguistical ones, and which can be only aquired through interacting with other kids, and engaging in some activities that involve children working with each other.
To conclude,There are different methods of learning in which kids can learn from. First there is the homeschooling method which encourages students to express themselves, and then there is the public schooling which provides students with the experience and the abilities to communicate with others.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, then, while, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98333333333 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71943417317 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9048381053 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18186039568 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070399866265 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063423801455 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118195904078 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325746748768 0.0443174109184 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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