How does the information in the listening passage add to the ideas presented in the reading passage?
the reading and lecture are both about students teaching methods, which explains how to teach students? The author of the reading believes that the conventional way of teaching in schools is running wrong, moreover, parents have to act as an instructor to their kids along with other responsibilities in the family. the lecturer opposes claims made in the article. he thinks traditional teaching way has more benefits than homeschooling.
first of all, the author points out that the curriculum in school is inappropriate and not so well organized.it is mentioned that this can limit student’s opportunities in top universities moreover it will harm their job competition in the future. this point is challenged by the lecturer, he says some curriculum is challenging, but it will be helpful and important for students. furthermore, she argues that the standard curriculum is designed by the education department in a way to assist students in their studying.
secondly, the author contends that the transition from is growing. the article notes homeschooling has benefits like kids will have strong bonds between themselves and parents, in addition to that parent is feeling grateful and good when the kids learn and grows. the lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests spending a lot of time with kids does not have a good future. He elaborates on this by mentioning that kids are growing up with parents will not be socialized with their peers in future life.
finally, the author states that students do not feel safe in school. the article establishes that some students are becoming victims of bullying and harassment in school. the lecturer, on the other hand, posits that these situation is happening, even though nobody does like them. He puts forth the idea that as an adult you have to deal with it because sometimes these things might be happening in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... be helpful and important for students. furthermore, she argues that the standard curriculu...
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...o assist students in their studying. secondly, the author contends that the transitio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14332247557 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88377941703 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7920062594 49.2860985944 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455760809908 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146775735645 0.0996497079465 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236680026525 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0285534331289 0.162205337803 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220214621477 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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