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There has been many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate using stars or not. The lecture says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the stars. However, the reading argues that the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and enumerates three reasons of support.
The first point of dispute is that humpbacks are intelligent enough to use stars as a navigator while they are migrating. The lecture asserts that there is no connection between humpbacks intelligent and between their ability to use the stars. For example ,ducks are not so intelligent and they are able to migrate as well. However, the reading argues that humpbacks brains have a high degree of complexity of intelligent, that is why they could migrate by using the stars.
Another controversial issue is that the humpbacks navigate in straight-line. The lecture says that humpbacks move in straight lines because the have some internal biomagnified force in their body sensitive to the earth magnetic field, that help them to move in straight line while they are migrating .But, the reading disagrees by saying that the humpbacks move in straight lines because they are orientated by some external feature like stars.
The final point of dispute is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called spy hoppy. The lecture says that the some other animals like sharks have the same behavior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do spy hoppy in the morning while there are no stars in the sky. Yet, the reading contradicts this point saying that humpbacks are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they are migrated from one place to another.
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...re says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the star...
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...rgues that the humpbacks are migrating by using the stars and enumerates three...
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...ior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do spy hoppy in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07823129252 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65663678473 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5264285639 49.2860985944 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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