It is more important to work at job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
People have a work in order to survive in this era. Everyone need to work hard for earning breed butter. Work is important in people life. Their same people work and they get high salary so they can fulfill all requirement. Other people do job in low salary and they also fulfill all requirement and they also enjoy in their work. I agree with this statement “it is important to work at job that you enjoy more with low salary rather than high salary that you not enjoy”.
To begin with, happiness is more important while people work. If employee are happy with their work so they can more focus on work and they can easily complete their work. People are not enjoy while they are in job then they feel boring. For example, my brother work in TATA Company they paid high salary but he not happy with their job so they feel boring.
Furthermore, select job on own interest. If people select their job base on their interest then they perform well. They are not matter how they earn they only focus on interest. For instance, when I was in collage that time I selected for job in company. I started doing internship but I did not like this job and I did not perform well. I also earn good amount of money. I refuse this job because I did not want to work in this job.
To sum up, happiness is more important in life instead of money. I agree with this idea that it is more important to work at job that you enjoy more. Money is does not matter while people are enjoy during work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urthermore, select job on own interest. If people select their job base on their i...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...well. I also earn good amount of money. I refuse this job because I did not want ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 22.412803532 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35357142857 5.08290768461 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10203679165 2.5805825403 81% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421428571429 0.540411800872 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8944198765 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.95 110.228320801 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392115493511 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136458975311 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131178282063 0.0662205650399 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28095320128 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123987529898 0.0443174109184 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.3589403974 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 12.2367328918 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.42419426049 73% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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